Great start Ciaran, but too long - the brief says a max of two minutes.
I don’t like the mask - I think you have enough footage without it
Try intercutting the car shots (which are great) with the bed shots (also great - lovely variety and framing)
Key shot is too long and should be intercut with the bed shots
Think about including other shots in the bedroom and perhaps a few more car shots without the mask.Tom Gent-
"Yeah you need to contrast the music some more, and yeah I think taking the mask out would be better."
Emily-
"The font was nice but when it said executive producer you cannot read it. The film felt really slow. Film was confusing but good."
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